November 30, 2025

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Corrections and Suggestions for Page.Md

Typos

Line	Original	Correction
32	"engine architecture is sill being worked on"	"engine architecture is still being worked on"
53	"even if I fell it could"	"even if I feel it could"
1884	"wrong in mu upsample pass"	"wrong in my upsample pass"

Phrasing Suggestions

These are optional improvements that maintain your casual dev-blog tone while improving clarity:

Line	Original	Suggested
127	"the rendering process is roughly as follow:"	"the rendering process is roughly as follows:"

Notes

voxel_slice_update_across frames.mp4

• The casual tone (phrases like "Lua bit my ass", "had a big thonk", "Damn you smart GPU") is intentional and fits the dev-blog style - no changes needed there.
• The underscore style for internal thoughts (with "_ ") appears intentional as a stylistic choice.